Second Draft of Front Cover

My second draft of my front cover is how I first imagined my music magazine to look like, however comparing this to a real music magazine I have now decided on a few things I would change. For example I would keep the original image without cutting out the background and although the model is holding a guitar it is covered by a main headline therefore not making it clear to the audience immediately that it is a music magazine. I like the menu bar along the bottom of the page as it keeps the whole page even and the sell lines are quite equally spread out. The title of the magazine links with the music theme however it is quite hard to read from a distance, and will struggle to attract a clear audience.